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PostSubject: Alex   Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:49 pm



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Name: Alex
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Height: 172,1 cm
Weight: 53,3 kg
Personality:
Alex is distinguished by his total lack of emotion which he often masks with a false, cheerful, yet transparent façade. After much mental conditioning and training with his master, Alex had suppressed almost all of his emotions, laying all of his loyalty to his commands, and thus making it easier for himself to accomplish dangerous, unpleasant, or unethical missions. Due to this training and his lack of social experience and personal initiative, Alex has great trouble in understanding how bonds between people can motivate others.

Alex's social awkwardness tended to get people angry, because he would often speak without considering his words and their effects on people. This was due to his inability to realise the difference between a rude statement and a true statement. Alex had read somewhere in a book that giving somebody a nickname would bring you closer to that person and develop your friendship, this resulted in Alex hurting his childhood friend's feelings, because he called her ugly, stating the first true character trait that came to his mind.

After spending more time with his senpai, Alex comes to appreciate bonds, particularly the bond that exists between his master and his step-brother, though Alex would come to have his doubts the step-brother when he began to commit crimes on an international scale, which his master would suffer for. This causes him to break out of his emotionless shell and start to remember the times he had with the old couple, that raised him. In doing so, Alex was able to start giving genuine smiles. Wanting to experience personal bonds for himself, Alex sets out to make as many friends as he can.Alex wever, since he is learning most of this out of books and by trial and error, he often accidentally ends up offending people with his nicknames and conversation. He has come to develop a more genuine, pleasant and thoughtful personality, while also showing signs of more emotion, such as enthusiasm and occasionally nervousness. After his first time with his master, Alex is seen being friendly towards others, helping companions when they need it, referring to peers kindly, and having fun in social situations. The greatest change in his personality, however, came after he encounters his old "step-parents". When they are being used as a living bomb, Alex becomes enraged and attacks mercilessly, showing genuine rage on his face. Alex also displays genuine sadness, shedding tears when his brother is freed from the technique and disappears.

Alex is very observant, and is always focused on his missions. He pays a lot of attention to detail, allowing him to quickly notice if something is not as it appears, as shown from how he easily sees through his master's tricks. This awareness spans beyond the trials of duty, as Alex was later quick to understand the nature of his master's inner burden. What he failed to understand, however, was that his master was not trying to save his step-brother. Alex holds his master in high regard, and tries to assist him whenever he's going through hardships.

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Village:Konohagakure
Rank: Gennin
Clan: None
Inventory:

~Weapons:

クナイ, Kunais *4 | 起爆札, Explosive Tags *3 | 手裏剣, Shurikens *4 | 光玉, Flash Bombs *2 | 短刀, Tantō

~Others:

手配書, Bingo-Bukku | 煙玉, Smoke Bombs *2 | 巻物, Scroll | Ink Container | Brush

Fighting Style:
超獣偽画, Chōjū Giga | Taijutsu

History:
A little boy, once a victim of a civil war, now trying to make his own way in the ninja world. He strugles through the hard things in life, that come when being alone. It all started when he was still a little baby in the age of two, the rebelling ninjas has reached the village of his family and have made camp. It was then certain that the war will reach their doorstep and that there will be no end, without any blood be spilled. In a few days the country's army of soldiers, samurais and loyal ninjas has arrived and the struggle begun.

In the mid hours of the night, a few ninjas has entered the house and in the fast and reckless actions they did, everyone was dead, but the little boy, thats life would never be the same as the rest.
. . .

As the years pass by, the boy has settled in a farm with a nice old couple that just needed a hand, and were able to feed another mouth. Soon a strange fellow passed by the farm, knocks on the door and with the face of man travelling for ages, he asked for a shelter over the night. The old couple had nothing against so the man shared the teenage boy's room. The stranger has noticed the boy's skill in arts and asked him, if he wanted to be a part of his adventure in which he would teach him how to give life to his works. Thus began the training of Alex, The one that gives life to his Art!

Character Stats:

Stamina: 2
Speed: 2
Strenght: 0
Intelligence: 3
Chakra Control: 3


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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Fri Jul 25, 2014 3:01 pm

Not to bum you out or anything, but this is an alternate universe. You can't exactly slip in with a canon.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Fri Jul 25, 2014 4:20 pm

I don't understand you.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Fri Jul 25, 2014 6:08 pm

I wasn't speaking in tongues, so I'm not sure why you wouldn't. Alternate Universe means this isn't the same place as the actual Naruto anime/manga. Its similar, but follows a different story taking from the concepts of the series. Canon means an actual character from the series.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sat Jul 26, 2014 10:37 am

So I can't use it?
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sat Jul 26, 2014 1:21 pm

I apologize, but that would be correct. As an alternate universe Naruto RP none of the canon characters existing in the series exist in this RP. We had one member change his history just because it referenced Hashirama Senju. Allowing a canon character with a canon back story full of nonexistent characters would be a bit much.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sat Jul 26, 2014 4:40 pm

Well then if I want to use this bio, what should I change in it, so I can use it and it be approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sun Jul 27, 2014 2:20 am

Honestly almost everything about it needs to be changed. We can't accept Sai as a character, which means that most of the bio will be changed. You can have him be a ROOT shinobi, though that's something that would likely be rped out in the story.

We really want to encourage you to make an original character, and we are more than happy to help in that process.

What about Sai attracted you to him as a character? Was it his power? His personality? His status in ROOT?

Try to focus on what fascinated you about him and expand on it, what do you want to explore more in a character of your own creation?

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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sun Jul 27, 2014 3:22 am

Well I actually like his looks (plus I am not very good in explaining looks, so I don't want to start over), his personality and I really like his fighting style, since I am also an artist and I like the concept.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:26 pm

So long as no one else objects I'm fine with you using Sai's name, image and fighting style, but I will at least request that you change the history into something of your own creation, please.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:31 pm

Okay then it is decided, if you decide to let me have those I shall start working on the history.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Sun Jul 27, 2014 9:25 pm

I think he could probably change the name. The look and fighting style and such is okay...but with the name too it might as well just be that character in a different setting.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Mon Jul 28, 2014 4:11 am

Yeah I can deal with that. The only thing I need from this bio is Looks and Fighting Style.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:04 am

Then go for it, I guess.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Tue Jul 29, 2014 6:13 am

One last question, what about the personality. Does that actually matter that much to a bio for ninjas?
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Tue Jul 29, 2014 8:25 pm

Erm... shortening it and cutting out the entire part relating to Sai's history and all that would be kinda nice. Basically use your own words rather than the wiki's.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Tue Jul 29, 2014 8:33 pm

Okay, I shall try my best, but I really suck at writing.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Wed Jul 30, 2014 2:01 am

We're all friends here man. Just do your best, that's all we can ask of you Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Wed Jul 30, 2014 2:03 am

Okay, I shall give it a try this afternoon.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Thu Aug 07, 2014 9:00 am

Well then what do you guys think? Is it good enough.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:38 am

The history looks good, but you left the personality full of manga characters.

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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:49 am

How about now?
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Mon Aug 11, 2014 9:59 am

I believe we also decided on at least giving him a different name.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Mon Aug 11, 2014 10:02 am

Ow yeah. Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex   Mon Aug 11, 2014 3:42 pm

The personality and history still have Sai instead of Alex, and the personality section seems to indicate a lot of history that hasn't happened in your history section. Depending on which aspect of Sai's personality you liked (was it being weird and antisocial?) you could just briefly describe that. (if it was changing from weird and antisocial to his later personality, then you could leave it as being weird and antisocial, and then roleplay out the changes)

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